2016年3月大學英語六級作文參考作文

　　【範文一】

The recent decades has witnessed the remarkable development of information technology, which indicates we have entered an era of information. However, here arises an issue about how to dive into oceans of information and acquire the useful one.

It is widely acknowledged that advanced information technology just provides us with a platform to search and share news, messages and our life experience. The source, truth and value of those information, however, are always unrevealed. Besides, those who master advanced technology are usually slaving for filtering, estimating and combining those fragmented information they have found, which further contributes to the difficulty of acquiring useful information. Just imagine we will host a conference about climate crisis and use a famous search-engine to look for something needed in the meeting introduction. Can you quickly and accurately acquire what you want?

To reverse this situation, government and technology firms should set up a more valid sources of knowledge while individuals need to define more detailed content to make the search more accurate. So important is their working hand in hand to make useful information no longer unrevealed.

　　點評：

題幹中明確需要focus on the difficulty in acquiring useful information in spite of advanced information technology，所以這篇文章同學們重點應該放在difficulty上。

範文中，開篇由一句時間狀語作主語引入到現象，並且用轉折提出主題詞useful information。文章中間段重點全部放在了尋找有用資訊的difficulty上。運用並列的邏輯關係將題幹中提到的information technology以及關於個人在資訊使用上的問題並列到一起。段落收尾是以一個設想加提問，用以引出第三段針對有效資訊獲取困難提出的建議。

最後一段使用建議的`手法，針對第二段所提出的difficulty的兩方面——科技公司和個人提出建議。最後使用一句倒裝句(So大寫倒裝)再次強調解決問題重要性來對文章做總結。最後一段的目的在於使得文章從單純的列舉誤導資訊的危害加入了作者自己對這一現象的思考，也讓文章的內容更加完整。

　　【範文二】

It is true that the internet has brought us great convenience and efficiency, however, as the data grows at an exponential rate, the severity of misleading information arises.

Deceptive news or tips travel fast online, and worse still, they may shadow our routine life or even hinder the progress of our society. Lack of enough consideration, we are easily misled by false information which always appears in bulk on the webpage. Some will alter their plans to deal with the so-called disaster but only affect their normal life; a few may even go further to violate social security and economic trend. Moreover, if the misleading news isn’t corrected soon, there may be a trust crisis between individuals and the government. For example, the nuclear leakage in Japan in 2011 has caused great panic in Eastern China, where thousands of people went out to rob salt after the rumor that salt can prevent radiation, and ended in a turbulence in the domestic market.

To prevent misleading information spreading, government should set up laws to regulate online news while individuals need to judge independently. Only when they work hand in hand will the harm of false information be diminished to the end.

　　點評：

題幹中明確標出同學們需要focus on the harm caused by misleading information online，所以同學們這篇文章重點就應該放在harm危害這個詞上面。

範文中，開篇以社會現象引入到主題詞misleading information誤導資訊的出現;之後第二段開始重點討論誤導資訊的嚴重危害。內容層層遞進，從謠言使一些人做出衝動行為，推進到若不治理將會產生對於政府信任危機。並且段落最後用日本核輻射導致國內搶鹽事件的舉例進一步證明了謠言的危害。中間段緊扣主題。

文章結尾部分採用建議式的結尾方式，提出了針對之前提出的危害的解決措施，從政府到個人都有對應的建議。這也更加緊扣之前第二段所提到的內容。最後一句運用押韻的手法(hand in hand對應to the end)將文章帶入收尾。最後一段的目的在於使得文章從單純的列舉誤導資訊的危害加入了作者自己對這一現象的思考，也讓文章的內容更加完整。

　　【範文三】

The picture describes a conversation between two people，one of them said： “I readabout 3 hours a favorite book is Facebook.”The picture intends to inform us that the Internet has exerted an important influence on reading for the modern citizens。

The phenomenon involves many factors，which can be listed as the follows. To begin with，with the rapid development of scientific technology. The Internet has become indispensable in our daily ubtedly，it provides people with many advantages and makes our life morecomfortable and efficient， including the way of reading. What's more，it is a moreadvanced way to get information needed by people，and an efficient way to search for materials.“I have hardly ever bought any books since 2003. I have been reading online in recent years.”said professor Wang from Peking University.“With the click of the mouse，any stories or information that I want at any given time or place，is there.”she may well explain why so many people now prefer to embrace the wonders of the Internet than read print copies of book or any other reading material。

Every coin hastwo sides，reading in social networking websites is no exception. Admittedly，there is false and useless information on the social networking websites， it is advisable that we read more critically and carefully。